Sunday, March 23, 2014

'Curse' - 55 fiction


“But we still are friends, right?” she questioned him in a hopeful voice.
“It’s…it’s not possible for me. I have feelings for you”, he replied with a meek look, before turning to go away.


And yet again, she lost a good friend as a curse for not reciprocating his ‘love’.



-SrishTi

17 comments:

  1. I have heard that happen in movies, yes. And stories- which I don't like much either. But that apart, does it happen really?

    Out of the pitiful relationships I had, there was just one girl who took to initiative even to ask me out. So... I don't know if this even happens. Maybe not in India.

    But I like the story, because it is short. Conveys a lot, now that I come to think of it. OF the things that have been, and the things that are about to be. Cool !

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It happens. May be you never noticed. :)

      Thank you! :)

      Delete
  2. #heartbreak

    Is it common that after a couple of days, friends start having feelings for others? Or has it been the main intention all along? Because, I have a couple in which each one is interested in one another, but the girl doesn't approve of it for so many reasons or may be just one ( which is the only thing I know : Age) .
    But they are still friends. I don't know how it works out eventually.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Even I don't know :P

      But it's not always the same intention.
      I'll tell you after gaining more experience :P

      Delete
  3. Well,...never happened with me. :(

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Isn't that great then? :D

      Vaise, what never happened? The proposal, or the after-effect? :P

      Delete
  4. You are so good at this. It's sad yes, but makes me appreciate more the ease with which you transcribed it.

    Keep writing. God bless :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. That was some compliment! Thank you so much for those words, Usama. :)
      As for the sad part, make sure no one gets to write one on you :P

      Delete
  5. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  6. I could relate myself so much with these few lines of yours. Heart touching...

    ReplyDelete
  7. never happened with me....not possible!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Not possible to happen with you, or not possible at all, generally? :)

      In latter case, I object! :D

      Delete
  8. Beautifully penned ! :).. n you Always do it ! <3

    (...wud restrain from analysing the possibilities , though ! :P :D )

    ReplyDelete
  9. U r great with your words!!
    keep it up!! :)

    ReplyDelete